All Comments on 'Judith'

Great story!

5

Is there a part two? Maybe I'm being dense but this sort of fell apart for me at the end....

Half way through page 2, why did 'Judith's' name change to 'Julie' and then back again?

"After they hung up, Julie called her mom and they agreed it would be best to bring Melanie back and let her sleep over at Grammys house.

After a while, Richard got up to close the window and reset the thermostat. He needed a good nights sleep. As he looked out the window he saw Julie climb the dock ramp carrying the little girl."

Ah, Robin!

Well done!

This may well be the most romantic story you have written!

The tone is very tender and loving.

Yes, I would like a part two.

***Thanks for the read.

Nice story! I assume there is a part coming

Another very tender weaving Robin. With just enough erotic content to keep all of us perverted types interested. 5*.

A very romantic bitter sweet story with a great twist to the haunted room. Your writing is good and just graphic enough to keep the story sexy. Thank you for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍