All Comments on 'Judy and the Handyman 01'

That's it???

Let me explain how stories are supposed to work.

A real story has a beginning, then a middle and lastly a" CLIMATIC" (pun intended} ending.

You are supposed to be posting stories, not paragraphs.

That's it? Really? This wasn't a story, it was a very predictable narration. It started out as a decent story line but quickly faded. At least it was only a short five minute read. Better luck on the next one.

Judy should call him back and when she greets him she should be naked and show him her mature hairy pussy.

This read more like a screenplay. The premise was good though.

thanks for the feedback. Yes I am new at this. ss2ss4ss6 THIS is just the beginning. I thought by having the title end with 01 it would elude to further installments to follow. 02 and 03 are completed and will hopefully be published soon. 04 is being worked on as I write this which will be VERY CLIMACTIC but probably not the end. I hope you all return as this story unfolds.

*** Good start keep going it's your story!! Thanks for sharing.

I've been a reader at this site for years (from the US), but this is my first time commenting on a story.

I am looking forward to reading more. I think your writing is well presented (no typo's, on first read plot and character development flow well, etc.). Good plot line, good character development. Thanks for all your work on this!!

I am looking forward to another chapter! And when Jack gets together with Judy, I am hoping for descriptive details. Give sexy fit Jack a bit os hair for his chest and abs -- something for Judy to be entertained by when she caress and tastes his chest!

Thanks for the read