by onthereb
They never married but stayed together as best friends with benefits...I believe that after some time it was much more than friendship, that they loved each other...But they thought that the life both want to embrace, it was better to stay single...The problem with this story, even if true, is that she was a tease, sure, but wasn't open to any one approach (the first night in the bar showed it)...Then without any talking between them, and without any previous sign, she was open to everything...The question: didn't this first episode sealed his decision to not marry? And maybe that decision was the right one, because they stayed together till the end of their lives (she is 3 years old than him), because it took out the burden of marriage from them...2*
Here, fuck my girl friend. Thanks.
WTF?
If the rest are as full of mistakes and as badly written as this one, don't bother posting them. I'm being generous with a two.
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!
dear annony!! And to really piss you off I'm not bonnie/vast, or whatever you call me wrong again asshole of LIT! gave this a 5 to offset your fag 1 vote. It has nothing to do with the story I just want to offset your 1 vote dumbass
No background on either of them? Did they just arrive from Mars with no earlier relationships that affect their lives? Also, with the only description of some bar scenes, how is this erotic--really it should be in "non-erotic."
If you can't even bother to post the lousy story in the right place, it can't be good and it wasn't - so many irritating mistakes. Next thing you need is some clever story line with dialogue not written by a teenager. This was awful.
1 star.
It's obvious from the story that you are gay (not that there's anything wrong with that).
PS -- ending the story with that "true" nonsense is the icing on the cake. Your idiotic story isn't true.
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!
but if so, you are like the pathetic cucks on blogs that crave sharing their women over all rationality.
No flow here or explanation how she went from a tease to a slut, nor why he likes her that way.
1* and coming in sitting down with a woman who had a partner, staying that long, wonder how many times a year he is 21?
If you had a I.Q. over 80 you would realize how stupid this was.
Is that it gets rid of people like this author.unfortunately,they breed faster than it takes them out
the fur muncher must have nothing better to do today but troll the pages of loving wives looking to call people names. What a looser. 1* for a slimy sewer story.
Where is the wife? A tease girl friend that turned into a slut without any reason. WTF
1*
I really wonder why some people read this kind of story if they are going to bitch so much. I liked it.
You would think that an author who has written so many stories would write at least one decent one. This one sucked.