All Comments on 'Juggler, Not Hero'

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I loved it! I was highly entertained!

1 of the worst stories I've ever read. You obviously know crap about boobs. Modest C or D? Those are good sized. Modest would be As or B's. Very insipid sex scenes. I'm very aware this is fantasyland but this story had me sick to my stomach.

1 star

ButterflyGal

As you say, but great fun. Thanks

A real steamroller. Most impressed that KB is the editor. Keep banging them out.

But it would be awesome if you continued this as a series

My only complaint is it could have been stretched out into a 3 parter at least. The main character confessing his love for this lady 16 years his senior on the last page. The random sister incest. The mom finding out. The marriage proposal. All waaay too rushed. But I understand that you probably didn't want to right a series so it's fine. Good job!

I like your stories but they get just a little crazy. Every story I have read of yours has every woman having anal sex. I was definitely disappointed when you made Amanda so overly kinky. What was causing his dizziness? You keep writing and I'll keep read.

THIS STORY SHOULD HAVE STARTED

ON PAGE 2, THE STORY ON PAGE 1, WAS

JUST HERO WORSHIP, NOT INCEST.

WELL DONE, BUT MIXED UP.

..THANKS..

USAF

Loved it!!!!

It deteriorated as it when on,especially the stupid ending.

liked it but a bit strange at the end

This was hilarious! While it started off as a good story, it just got wilder as it went on. Excellent construction.

That was fun! I thought for a moment near the end that mum and son were going to go at it followed by Jackie and her dad! Then there are Cathy's daughters, . . . . . .