All Comments on 'Jugs Ch. 04'

That was a great story that you wrote about Rebecca, mother, Pete, Megan, Tracy and VI. I like how you start off with Rebecca and the kids in bed having fun. I like how she was able to have some good orgasms with Pete, Megan and Tracy. I like how you develop the story at all Rebecca and VI getting to know each other and having fun with each other at the Lake. I like how they came back to Rebecca's house and found the kids doing something but you stop the story short their. I hope you write another chapter to the story so that we can find out what was going on in the bedroom when they came back

Cabone is a very good story teller. Your comment was probably removed because it served no purpose. To give the author a zero was just a sign of the trolls on this site that love to attack writers just so their stories get rated poorly. I see that you have never submitted a story. However, if this site would have the option like Amazon to see the comment history of the submitter, I am sure we would find that you sir are a true troll.

So what did Vi see? I'm sure it had something to do with her daughter getting fucked.Great story, and hope that is continued soon Thanks.....Rich

The story line just keeps getting better and better.

WOW.

And so much juicy story to go. All so well foreshadowed too.

WOW...

cabone writes some hot HOT story

There's another Great story just waiting for Vi to peak in the door... to see Pete, and ??? Calida???

And what about Steve and Vi's husband and their return? Don't the Dads get to enjoy all that glorious women flesh? Dads like incest as much as Moms do. Pete can't provide enough cock for all those women at once.

And what about that little tid-bit of Pete eating out his own snowball? Hmmmm...

WOW

GREAT story!

GREAT Writing!

Keep it coming!

Pleeaase...

OH come on!!! Great way to end Becca's story, but I wanted page 6. Well one can only wonder if Mrs. Anderson like what she sees or not.

Outstanding story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please write the next part soon.

"Vi, I could never hate you, but, along with being hurt, I'm shocked that Dan would cheat on you. You are the most beautiful woman I know. I cannot believe that asshole would hurt you like that."... This said by mom who's cheating on her husband with her children. Figure that.

I would have liked the chapter if there weren't husbands. Isn't she a hypocrite criticizing her friend's husband when she has just done the same she is criticizing? That prevents me from enjoying the story. I won't leave any rating to not lower the rating.