by Rambling_Chantrix
I enjoyed this a lot, it was hot, a well-told story, and, strange as it is to say about a piece of fiction as pornographic as this, incredibly wholesome. Keep writing!
@Anonymous - thank you so much for the kind words! I'm excited to be getting this kind of feedback, and I feel encouraged to keep making weird shit :)
This was beautifully written. Not just as erotica, which had amazing imagery, but as a story itself. It was a rollercoaster of emotions, and I couldn't help but be sucked in (pun intended). It was like reading a fantasy book and forgetting about reality. Well done, you should be proud.
@Anonymous - wow, thank you! Your comment has turned around an unpleasant day for me, and I am touched by your words. I will keep doing my best <3