All Comments on 'Jules 11 - The Game is Revealed'

Have read all of your chapters/scenes to date but not commented — not sure why as I smiled throughout and usually comment on pieces that resonate for me.. The entire series so erotically captivating, tantalizing without relying heavily on explicit sex — OK, a few scenes including BJ with Paul ( still wrestling with that viz. J’s intervention). And nothing wrong with well crafted sex whether subtle/sensual or debauchery; after all, sex tells the story and vice versa in well done erotic fiction. Dialogue and scene descriptions so well done; humorous while sensual and serious. The “game revealed” scene short, so full of emotion/tension and highly erotic without overt sex. We all need friends like J, don’t we. Maybe this is the end of “Jules”, which would be fine — we can well imagine our two heroines seamless now, but if you wish to share more I’m on board. Regardless, certainly hope you have more to share from your vivid imagination.

@Migbird - Thanks for taking the time to comment and thank you for the kind words. There are two more chapters winding their way through moderation as we speak. I honestly find the lead up to the sex to be much more erotic than the act itself, both as a reader and a writer. So that tends to be where my focus lies.