All Comments on 'Julie & Steve Ch. 02'

But the end got somewhat undesirable. I don't like the way you did in this story....you built up something that should have been beautiful and then cancelled it out by Steve saying he did not "love" her. If two people are fucking repeatedly, there should be a certain amount of "love" in lieu of lust. Their union was heading toward making a baby, and you ruined that. Their age difference should not make a difference....sperm does not differentiate when they overcome the female "egg".

This was a very poor story with a sad ending. Steve was a clear-cut horse's ass in the way he treated her in accordance with Mormon principles that relate to this kind of behavior.

For the read.