by Julietravels
In Chapter 1, Robert was from "a professional family back in Ohio." Now in Chapter 2, at Thanksgiving "Robert flew home to Massachusetts." Where is he really from?
I get it! Robert gets Julie's cherry, has a fuck-buddy for his senior year in college, and graduates. He then leaves Portland and goes back home to ( insert state ) to his REAL girlfriend. You know, the virgin with the big tits, gets married and becomes a successful CPA.
LOL. I've got to read Chapter 3 and see what this author dreams up.
Julie was an idiot. This story was a mess. Get an editor. Write something more compelling that creates some interest in your characters. Because at the end of this, I didn't care whether or not Julie was having sex with a pack of monkeys.