by BradCarson
It would've been an easier read if you had decided to use paragraphs.....
Sometimes it's before the morning light that reality dawns with lustless clarity.
You brought it home.
Thanks
With Regard
I love the story. I was in the same situation as "Julie" a few times and reading it was like re-living it but in a good way.
thought story was very well written.the only reason i didnt award 5 out of 5 was that i was not taken with the closeness of the family involvment.would have been great if brother/sister relationship
was cousins instead.
The striping and teasing the guys was really hot ... ending kind of depressed me though and ruined my moment. Maybe it's because I like these stories for the fantasy angle of things but Brad's whole life breakdown just left me feeling sad and guilty that I got excited about the sexual parts.