All Comments on 'Julie's Blossoming'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
What's this one line shit?

It would've been an easier read if you had decided to use paragraphs.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Strong Work Author

Sometimes it's before the morning light that reality dawns with lustless clarity.

You brought it home.

Thanks

With Regard

Carrie2youtooCarrie2youtooover 17 years ago
Too Close to Home

I love the story. I was in the same situation as "Julie" a few times and reading it was like re-living it but in a good way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
first time critique

thought story was very well written.the only reason i didnt award 5 out of 5 was that i was not taken with the closeness of the family involvment.would have been great if brother/sister relationship

was cousins instead.

ReDiscoveringReDiscoveringabout 11 years ago
Some parts threw me off a bit

The striping and teasing the guys was really hot ... ending kind of depressed me though and ruined my moment. Maybe it's because I like these stories for the fantasy angle of things but Brad's whole life breakdown just left me feeling sad and guilty that I got excited about the sexual parts.

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