All Comments on 'Jump Started'

Good story!

5

Don't understand the Elliot / Devon I am confused but a great story

Thank you for a very entertaining and enjoyable story. You write so well and your descriptions and development of the story had me wishing that I had had a "Miss V" when I was that age.....sigh/lol. Thanks for a good read...wish I could write and weave a story as well as you do!

So, was the young man's name Devon or Elliott? I'm a little confused.

Thanks for the read.

Yes, good story, but you need to sort out the confusion of Violet/Vivien and Devon/Elliott names to make it perfect.

Well written as always but I was confused by the Devon and Elliott as well.

Great story. Slow build up as it should be. Thanks

A very playable story. Enjoyed it.

Wonderful story! What a lucky young man he would be!

Love this.

***** One the the best storylines I have read this year. Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

Great story. Need to get the names straight though.

The name change from Violet (Vi) to Vivian (Viv) caught me flatfooted. Would have been 5* without that.

Great story

It was a GREAT story. But just to give the author some information, He said in his story that Sheila (the 76 year old woman) was too old to screw. She was NOT too OLD for screwing at 76--BELIEVE ME! I was in a sexual relationship with an elderly woman for years! She was 52 years older than I was. We were still having intercourse when she was 95!

To all of the other readers that comment that there's not a lot of build up to your stories. Well folks, you just read one that not only had a lot of sex, but was also filled with story from beginning to end. Great story. Another 10 on the stars.

SOOO Good. It couldn't have been better. There are so many men that don't really know or understand how to make a woman happy during sex. Understanding her needs before his own.