All Comments on 'Jungle Fever'

Hi Scentto,

Very good story and well written. Would like to chapter 2.

Ed

very interesting...and i also would enjoy a part 2

great story with a entwining storyline, can't wait for the next chapter

ok story, that girl sounds hot.

however, there was never a "communist dictator" in Nicaragua. there WERE decades of US-INSTALLED dictators who murdered tens of thousands of people and made life miserable for everyone there (my family included).

then there was a socialist (at least in theory) govt. that made some improvements but was ultimately destroyed by the US terror war that you were a part of. (the guys you worked with specialized in torturing and raping women and kids, not so sexy now, eh?)

the "communist dictator" was recently reelected, and though i have my problems with him he is proving to be even milder than before.

so learn about a fucking region (not from your military handlers) before you go there again to fuck the locals.

Gigantic descriptive words

Why? The level of description you

go into simply by slapping on so many

different ways to say "nice rack" hurts.

Its a good story, but remember that

your readers have imaginations too!

Hey, hombre, how the hell is the girl going to get knocked up if he cums in her "bowels"? You're talking about screwing her poop chute, not her twat! Cheers!