All Comments on 'Jury Duty'

Wow, Westerntiger knows how to write them.

Sure hope they will get together for another encounter soon.

Although very hot, in some respects, this is typical 1970's "stroke book" prose. Mind you, if Marvel Comics did porn, you'd have a job.

I totally get the fantasy aspect, but this is so far out of reality as to be laughable; Though I would like to see Stan Lee do illustrations.

And if you'd like a pointer or two, try using contractions when writing conversational dialog, 'I'm' instead of "I am", etc. Otherwise you sound stilted.

I thank the writer who had the courage to actually leave his name. I also went to see if he had written anything and he actually had - what a surprise. Most of the negative comments from writers on this site come from people too scared to leave a name or who have never written a story in their life. I don't agree with Goneoffshore - but I respect his courage.

Very hot stuff! Previous comment was negative about this "fantacy" story, pehaps I'm wrong but I thought most of this site was fantacy.

Personally this author is my favorite, this story is one of the reasons why.

Maddie