All Comments on 'Just a Crush Ch. 05'

by NataleeF

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

this was definitly worth the wait i hope you come out with another chapter soon!!!!!!!!

jkananijkananialmost 12 years ago

Aaaahhhh! I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
The way she treated Travis

Is very disgusting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Sweet.

I love this story. It has no flaws. Evan is so sweet and considerate, minus the party incident. I hope ch. 6 comes soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

i so disagree that that was disgusting, its life, and she felt horrible about travis, this is a love story about her and evan not her and travis cant help who you love!!!!!! please come out soon with thenext chapter its like an addiction, your an amazing writer!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

to the one who disagrees it was disgusting the way she treated Travis, it was, regardless of of their love for each other, she led Travis on, she used him until the one she wanted came back, if you don't find that disgusting or wrong, there is something wrong with you

NataleeFNataleeFalmost 12 years agoAuthor
To clear everything up...

Young love is confusing, we all have been there. Yes she used Travis but not intentionally. In my mind of this story she enjoyed her time with Travis and maybe at times taken it to far. But who, yet again, hasn't ever done tha?. When she started things with Travis she thought in her mind everything was over for her and Evan and she wanted to move on. She did have feelings for Travis but nothing like it was compared to with Evan. Sometimes we really want things to be because it seems right and the right thing to do. But yet again falling in love isn't always perfect and there is flaws. Also Travis knew full well her heart wasn't in it and he took the risk anyway. So in my mind they are both to blame. Also thank you everyone for such wonderful feedback even if its to disagree, I'm glad you have taken the time to read and hopefully enjoy my story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Eeeeep! I can't wait for chpt. 6!

sucker4romancesucker4romancealmost 12 years ago
I hate people who leave mean comments..

... i write too and if it's not constructive criticism then it just hurts, and makes it hard to write. Natalee your amazing and i completely get the relationship with Travis, she wanted to be with him but she didn't have control over her feelings for Evan. keep up your amazing work and please, next chapter soon :)

NataleeFNataleeFalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you

sucker4romance. I appreciate the encouragement, It definitely can be hard, but if your like me you love to write. Everything isn't always so black and white and I think that should go for romance stories as well. I've started on chapter 6 but I can't seem to get past a particular part. I hope you continue to write as well and I'm glad you enjoy my stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I'm getting restless

It's been a month. Ive reread this whole story so many times, I love it. Please hurry!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
When is the next one

I need the next chapter!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing story

Loved it, cant wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Been quite a while since you said chapter 6 was coming, WHEN is it coming?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
UPDATE: 02/06/13 Okay so I know it has been awhile but I'm almost done with Chapter 6! It is coming to a close and you can it expect to see it very soon. It still has some kinks that need fixing so if anyone would like to take a crack at it and try to ed

Very soon was quite a while ago!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
please!

I love this story!! Please post part 6!

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