by NataleeF
this was definitly worth the wait i hope you come out with another chapter soon!!!!!!!!
I love this story. It has no flaws. Evan is so sweet and considerate, minus the party incident. I hope ch. 6 comes soon!
i so disagree that that was disgusting, its life, and she felt horrible about travis, this is a love story about her and evan not her and travis cant help who you love!!!!!! please come out soon with thenext chapter its like an addiction, your an amazing writer!!!!!!
to the one who disagrees it was disgusting the way she treated Travis, it was, regardless of of their love for each other, she led Travis on, she used him until the one she wanted came back, if you don't find that disgusting or wrong, there is something wrong with you
Young love is confusing, we all have been there. Yes she used Travis but not intentionally. In my mind of this story she enjoyed her time with Travis and maybe at times taken it to far. But who, yet again, hasn't ever done tha?. When she started things with Travis she thought in her mind everything was over for her and Evan and she wanted to move on. She did have feelings for Travis but nothing like it was compared to with Evan. Sometimes we really want things to be because it seems right and the right thing to do. But yet again falling in love isn't always perfect and there is flaws. Also Travis knew full well her heart wasn't in it and he took the risk anyway. So in my mind they are both to blame. Also thank you everyone for such wonderful feedback even if its to disagree, I'm glad you have taken the time to read and hopefully enjoy my story.
... i write too and if it's not constructive criticism then it just hurts, and makes it hard to write. Natalee your amazing and i completely get the relationship with Travis, she wanted to be with him but she didn't have control over her feelings for Evan. keep up your amazing work and please, next chapter soon :)
sucker4romance. I appreciate the encouragement, It definitely can be hard, but if your like me you love to write. Everything isn't always so black and white and I think that should go for romance stories as well. I've started on chapter 6 but I can't seem to get past a particular part. I hope you continue to write as well and I'm glad you enjoy my stories.
It's been a month. Ive reread this whole story so many times, I love it. Please hurry!!
Been quite a while since you said chapter 6 was coming, WHEN is it coming?
Very soon was quite a while ago!