by GothWannabe
This is my first erotica, based on a dream I had. It's one of my favorites, and I hope you all like it too. Thank you for reading it!
You could have added that her neck had marks on it.I enjoyed your erotica.Please write more.
A very good beginning. This story shows promise but is that all there is ? Is there more to come ? please say yes
This is one of my favorite fantasies, and this story was extremely well written. I LOVED IT!!!
Great story! Who doesn't want a man like that, who can make you cum and cum? I know I do. :P