All Comments on 'Just a Jab Ch. 15'

Just love the pay back on Jedd, hope he ends up holding up a high rise block as part of its foundations.

I just wonder if the twins are planning a "surprise" for John such as having him make women out of them for their birthday. Now what a "double-whammy" that would be!!!!

Another good one. It's about time for the next installment? Yes?

I have plenty more in store for our hard up hero, but would like feedback on whether to continue. I am also considering going back to the start and re-writing the early parts. I would appreciate any constructive comments.

I will be working on a new story in a different category in the meantime. This other story has been echoing around in my head for some time and needs to come out.