All Comments on 'Just a Jab Ch. 20'

Definitely a new take on its theme. Keep up the good work

Unfortunately, the ending appears to be rushed. New problems were introduced, but not actually resolved.

What became of Catherine and her kids? Did they get a house at the "resort." Did she get a job as the Head Housekeeper? Did her kids help with babysitting?

Did DiClicker and her producers lose the lawsuit?

Did John and Linda have a second child?

Hmm. Perhaps we need a sequel.

SIX STARS!

Why did Glenda become Gloria?

I had been wondering also why glenda became gloria maybe you should go back and change her name to gloria in the rest of the book it is easier to remember. the other people commenting have a point the ending was rushed a little and there were quite a few loose ends that needed tying up but it was a really good book.

Hi.

Sorry for the name mistake, not the first.

Have been trying to revamp the entire story from the start, but health gets in the way. Blame time and illness, treatment is worse than the problem except maybe the whole dying thing.

Guess it's time to seek editorial assistance to fix my mistakes and make improvements on my amateur efforts. I did seek edit help in the early days, but was unsuccessful.

My only criticism about this story is the sex scene, which seems rushed, I can't feel what John is feeling, as if the sex scene was just an ordinary narrative. I often skip them because I prefer to read their conversations and their daily lives.