by VictorN55
Second time reading this fantastic story of love. I thought you might have finished it by now though. You did say to be continued. PLEASE.
A significant amount of time has passed without any more being added to the story. I'm glad that you kept the mom stuff strictly to dreams and/or fantasy. But it still turned me off. 😒 2/5
I hope this series continues, would like to see Allison involved with the two of them.
The story built awesome, and needs a follow-up for the brother and sister to find out that their parents are the same way actually brother and sister
It went off the rails when sex with Mom was introduced. It wouldn't have bothered me that much for Allison to reappear in Liz's life. I didn't bother to read the complete last chapter.
Leave the mother out of this story and the Lesbian lover as well.
If they are included this tale will go downhill fast
the series was a good one until the end. the implication of sex with mother ruined the the story line.
HOW DID THIS HAPPEN? I WOULD LIKE THIS STORY TO RETURN TO IT'S ORIGINAL DIRECTION. HOW LONG DO WE HAVE TO WEIGHT THIS TIME TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER OR TWO?
Very hot story. I like the series so far. Please keep writing and thanks for your time and imagination.
Will Mom and Dad be brother and sister
Will Alison return ?
Can’t wait for the next chapter