All Comments on 'Just a Test Run'

I loved the moment when Mom could tell at a glance. Priceless.

5*

Tc

It wasn't really an incest story, but a love story broke out, very nice.

fun story. what did she tell Tim?

Fun story.

And what about…Tim?

Nice story, thanks for sharing. Story begs for a part 2. How did the Dad know that they would hook up? What does Mom think about the 2 of them?

Thanks again.

Great well writen and with the romance perfect tie to the sexualsharing!

Cute, I liked it a lot. It was like a non boring Hallmark story!!!!

Thanks to all for the feedback. You might like “The Swimmer “

I’ll be honest, I was initially disappointed by the ending. But then I thought of the old show business adage, “always leave them wanting more” and realized that’s hopefully what you did.

How could their parents know? How are they fine with it? And what about poor Tim??!!

Hopefully these questions and more will be addressed in future chapters.