All Comments on 'Just a Tiny Little Hole'

Very nice story. Thanks.

I like a story that makes the mind put the pieces together. Very good.

As first times go, this was sexy and hot.

His - her, is too often the wrong way. Nice idea, bad writing.

Beautiful 💕 thank you

This is really good barring some strange physics about the hole in the wall. You really need to go through and edit the genders though, it's constantly switching the gender of the characters, almost as if it were written with two characters of the same gender and not edited well.

Hello, sorry for the gender mistakes, it's due to translation from french to english and I didn't notice them :) I'll be more careful next time ! Thanks for your kind comments everyone.

Very good erotic fantasy.

Really enjoyed the premise of this story. As others have said, it gets a bit confusing with the mix up of his and hers, but despite this a good story overall. Keep writing, would love to see a continuation of this story.

4 Stars, nice story, not sure how she got her history of understanding and expectations about what naked male looked like, but it was a fun read. By the way as a writer, you seem to misuse the words "he" and "her" in some places. I suggest you have someone you trust to re-read your completed stories before you release them. Looking forward to a possible chapter 2.