All Comments on 'Just Ask Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Reminds me of a crush, to love I had. The way he owned me mentally for years. I was willing to do anything to be his slave, to please him, to taste him, to lick him while he slept. I washed his clothes, his dishes, his house, his bathroom. He wrote a textbook that won awards while I just worshipped him, sucked him, smelled him even when he was stinky. It all started when he drove me up a hill, on the back of his motorcycle to a spot overlooking LA lights at night. I fell in love with his very essence. He passed away years ago, and I still think only of him.

Dragonfly424Dragonfly424about 8 years ago
Great story

Jut found this story. So hot!!! Great characters. Can't wait for next chapter!!!!!!!

baikalisanbaikalisanabout 8 years ago
Good

Now. Just a little more often ? Please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wonderful!!! More Please . . .

Love this story, sexy, tender, erotic and hot, hot, hot !!!

Want to know more about this journey of Hayden and Jackson. These are terrific characters and your writing style is quite wonderful to read. Yes, YOU sure can do this, keep writing!!!

IntegraldxIntegraldxabout 8 years ago
Adorbs

Keep it up. :)

shirohshirohabout 8 years ago
Im with baikalisan

yes, so good. just please don't make us wait so long.

you are awesome, keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
this is just so...

Lovely. Omg. Thank you for writing this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Please, please, please write more of this.... I feel like pages have been ripped out of a novel and I'm left wondering what happens next!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Students

So this is what students get up to, loved it, more please

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I deleted the previous chapters of Just Ask and am working on a rewrite. I also changed my username. Be careful about how much personal information you put on the internet :D How do I make this my full-time job? Thank you for reading! Please enjoy

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