All Comments on 'Just Being Neighborly...'

by OmaWife

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CanadianMCanadianMalmost 4 years ago
Good One

Nice first story. The sex was hot. Just one comment, you write about the characters as if there was a previous story when there wasn’t. Could have developed the characters a bit more. But I liked it and you have it set up for a followup.

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