All Comments on 'Just Clowning Around'

I loved this story

It was funny and sexy

You misquoted, "Rudolph with your nose so bright...." but it made me smile.

And yes, comedy is about timing. Most of the good things in life are.

I'm glad you're not afraid of clowns.

Fun at the circus!

5

A clever and fun erotic coupling! Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Nice story. One item confused me, though. At the beginning it reads "Next to Dolph was supposed to be his niece, Anna, who loved the circus, but she cancelled as was texted by his sister, to him."

So this implies he is by himself.

At the ending, the story reads "Dolph got Bianca's number and drove Anna home."

Was Dolph by himself or not? Please understand I confuse easily.

Thank you all for comments. I made a revision error with Anna along with a couple other errors. Thank you for your patience with my errors. I may write a sequel, ok, will likely write a sequel. Again, thank you.

A fun read. I was going to comment about Anna, but someone beat me to it.