by KateHarp
I hope you actually get together with this guy....He is definitely one lucky fellow to have a woman like you want him...Good luck!
you are a good writer and now I have to go read your backlist.
Great story. Found it quite teasing since nothing really happens but you have a great writing style. Hope to read more from you.
Sometimes when I read these "internal monologue" things I'm left kind of cold. Not here. You make it very real, very believable.
Sometimes - very occasionally - you read a piece of writing which allows you to see through the glass darkly, to experience a bit of what it would be like to be the other gender. That was one, for me - a window into a very foreign land, but one in which I am intensely interested.
Congratulations - and thanks
Im always thinking about a girl i work with like this, its nice to think shes fantasizing about me too.
Please finish this story! The flow, the style, the setting, the narration -- it is beyond sexy!