by christa_p
Hey anonymous, first if all, it's a plot device not a PhD dissertation. Second, it's been all over the news so that is not some fringe opinion. Third, it may or may not be true, who knows?
Simmering; very sensual feeling as intended. Liked Jocelyn’s sassy bit sarcastic demeanor early in the piece and how she calmed her libido before the practice massage. Your Elena - Tamara series so well written; captivating. This piece surely/hopefully has more to it, though not numbered. By the way, you are right about your lines around sexuality spectrum being plot device and the well established psych research behind the notion. Enjoy your creativity; nice to see you posting — missed you in 2022.
I like Jocylen’s scheme! Slow and steady wins the race. Looking forward to the heat rising in Cheyenne’s mind.
I added the words "chapter 1" before publishing this, it's intended to be a four part series. Does anyone know how to make edits?
Too many haters on this site! I do not care for the short stories (some are 2-3 paragraphs or less ), to each their own. But I do not leave nasty comments. You write whatever you like Christa. Best wishes.
Not to worry; you are creative. Happy that you have more. It will be obvious when you post. Thanks.
To Christa_p and the rest. If you bring up terms or ideas even as a plot device they are open for challenge and discussion. In regards to being mean - was any profanity used against you? Was there an attempt to censor you?
I hope you keep writing and have a pleasant day.
Nice start, Christa. Looking forward to the next instalments to see how easy Jocelyn manages to make the seduction and get her hands on every part of Cheyenne’s body
Well I thought that was a really great start. The plot was well conceived and unfolded teasingly and sensually. Keep up the good work.
Enjoyed the slow build up, as any erotic story should have. Looking forward to reading the remaining parts of the series.