All Comments on 'Just Get Over It Bobby'

Why would they move to assisted living? Both active on a ranch. What help do they need. Like the rest of this story just try to wrap,everything up perfectly. We touched each other and felt electricity. I saw Ann by her. What trope

Love stories such as this. I cannot help but to agree with "Iamcurious" entirely. LP

Way too much set up. I lost interest.

Nicely done! Thank you. 5

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This was an excellent story line. Wife cheats, get her to sign a post nup, and then wait till you can document her cheating again. But.... you dragged this in for way too long, for no reason. The first 3 pages were back story drivel. Could have been accomplished in one. Since I didn’t read that crap, I probably missed out in the whole “ Ann” connection.

The other things that really bother me about these type of stories is this- She leaves on the plane trip, and publicly announces to all her girlfriends, who announce to her husband, she is going to fuck the creep. And creep, who presumably has a lot to lose if this goes public, send the pics to hubby. I don’t believe it, Gave it two stars...

It was okay. Just like February sucks.

In too many places it was like you were feeding fodder. This happened then that happened then this happened... No depth, just useless facts of what went on. I ended up skipping ahead. I didn't even read the whole epilogue

The main character is too "truly once and for all amorous" for monogamous beliefs.

Appears like the author just edited 3 different stories together. It was an ok read 3*

Great story!

11/10!!!!!

You know its a good story if Satyrdick says its 11/10.

Wow this one really touched all the emotions I had a enjoyable time reading this one If I could rate 6 stars I would have

A decent version of a classic story of love, found, lost and found again, and tragedy, and surmounting adversity. Quite well told too, and pretty much free-flowing, without all those irradiating grandma, punctilious an speeding moss steaks then can ease hilly rue inn their text flow of an otherwise well-written, and gripping story! I really do not know why people get so hung-up on wanting a good story to be well told, like this one actually is!

Well done! Thank you! A welcome relief to read a well-written (or edited) story on this site! So refreshing!

Yes, 11/10. Very touching story with bits of history included.

Like they say...2 outta 3 ain't bad

LOl you can just cross a boundary that is a dealbreaker. It breaks the deal. You don't have to be the worst slut in the world or the worst lothario. You just have to be garbage enough to go behind the back of someone you claim to love and poof, the love is turned into something very shallow.

love is actionable=it results in loving actions

Mostly good story, but the footballer part feeled so, so out of place. Felt kinda forced, Guess I got tired of February vibes, lol

Interesting 118 comment and it seems eve a least one other author comments in about 9 months.

I was looking for a nice romance and found two. Many comments say the story was too unreal. Unfortunately, human nature is just that diverse. Live long enough and you will see just about everything. Most live in a small world of personal experience.

My only criticism of a 5.0 ROMANCE was the 90-10. Should the villain have been a basketball star. It was Wilt Chamberlain that publicly claimed 20,000 trysts.

JUST ENJOY A GREAT READ

The Hoary Cleric

It was a real rollercoaster. First Ann's death, then Gary's. Shelly was a nightmare, but she did give him 2 sons so not a complete loss. A good ending for all made it right. 5 Stars

I was wondering what Ann was doing in the first part of the story as it seemed to be disconnected from the middle part. This was a set up for last part. However, I feel the first part could be cut down. As to the tattoo, I feel he could have added Emily's name to the tattoo and have both names for all to see. Thus Emily would be reassured that he loved her as much as Ann.

Agree with BH54, great story.

Yes indeed, a roller coaster. But what's not to love about a roller coaster?? Great story, Lotsa love shown. LP

Two stories for the price of one? Sure seemed that way. Maybe even three stories. Pretty good, a little long.

A good story well told and well put together BUT why do these wives think it is ok to just have a bit of strange once in a while I hate ALL of them (jaybee186)

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Good story….the “Mile High Club” scene was a little bit out of “February Sucks” but it worked as a way to prove Shelly’s true colors. Only major problem I had was with Emily being such a stranger when she and Bobby meet. She was Ann’s first cousin and her bridesmaid, and presumably Bobby and Ann would have gone to her wedding (Ann probably being in the wedding party) so she had to have been somewhat

familiar to Bobby. I agree that Bobby needs to make an addition to his tattoo to include Emily!!!

not bad, a little long. Sure hope # 3 works out better than one and two. Assuming Shelly is somewhere face down in a ditch with numerous STD's.

Good story!

4

Bringing syphilis in to the story may have been a mistake. You realize that this disease is very communicable, and Lance passed Shelly around for 12 to 24 hours, whoever had it first gave it to everyone else. Additionally, early caught syphilis can be cleared up by one injection, but leave bacteria in the body for decades, and then reappear. Also, I agree that Bobby should have known Emily as Ann was surely in Emily's wedding, and so might he have been too? But it was good hooking them up in the end. Great story line. Well done. Keep writing.

XYZ

Just a long drawn out load of fucking rubbish

Nice, but painful, love story.

Ed

Was Carter his biological son? We have no clue to Shelly's motivation. Just that she is a tramp, even worse than Linda in February Sucks.

Pure class

Great story!

What an Epic story! 10 stars to writer! Thank You for this great story and great writing! I wish that I could write at least half as well. THANKS

Love this story. I could not reading until I finished it. Guess I’m a softy for a happy ending..

Great story. But didn’t Carter actually marry his cousin and since his dad married her mom before Carter got married then he would of also been marring his sister in law/ cousin too??

Really really really stupid brain-dead story

@anon, I guess part 2 will be posted in incest/Taboo instead of LW

4/5

Nato_

Anon posted a good question about whether Carter married his cousin/sister since their parents first. I think the missing word is "Step". A step is the designation of unrelated children brought into the marriage. So when his dad married his girlfriend's mom, they became Step-siblings which means there is no blood relation. Children with a common parent are half-siblings.

Since there is no blood relation it's not incest from a biological sense. Genealogy-wise a chart would probably do well to show the separation better than a title describing the relationship. Still weird to think about.

That being said, loved the story. Full marks.

"He said "It's a simple mathematical equation. She gets 90% of the assets and you get 10% of what the two of you had."

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Where the fuck do you live, mate!? And the lawyer said that right before noting that the both of them had roughly the same income. Seriously, Divorce Laws get more and more fantastical with every Author joining the LW-Scene.

QuickMagazine does not want to get into all the sociopolitical debating going on in the comments, nor respond to others' comments this time around. Suffice it to say that this here story is a keeper, though not perfect. So, 4 it is. Glad that Bobby found happiness with Emily, tattoo and all. Shelly seemingly landing OK is acceptable. Since she did lose her family, after all. That's justice enough. And yes, the sudden plane trip with the NFL player probably wouldn't have existed but for the story from nearly exactly one year prior to this one.

Just full of bullshit for most of the story and far too many people in it, I skipped over most of it as I couldn't keep up with all of them. Basically a load of shit

Basically it's just another "February Sucks" story with different names for the NFL star, the unfolded husband and the airhead cheating wife. Near exact same plot but an earlier happy marriage to lead up to the without giving it away.

A great Ranch story of turning manure into great fertilizer.

Well done, Sunshineman2019

THC

A poor version of February Sucks, and absolutely nothing new or interesting. Just old stuff reframed.

I expected more follow up on the ex having a bad life (karma).

It is a rehash of Feb Sucks but still a good read.

I gave it a five to balance out some folks that wanted a scorched earth BTB ending.

I appreciate the story, the ending was great....1,000 times huh.

Reminded me a lot of the Feb. sucks story, with some changes, but not enough. The buildup - their history - for me was just too long, while the "meat" of the story seemed too short. She leaves, he gets pictures, she returns. All in less than a page. While I do appreciate the attempt (I didn't like the original Feb Suck story, but some of the others were really good, at least to me), I think she should've been made to pay more than a divorce for the misdeed.

---- That he had to wait initially to divorce his wife, lest me fall into financial ruin, he's being made to suffer twice- now from the legal system. There should be a way of balancing out things, especially when dealing with a cheating wife. He shouldn't have to pay alimony, house expenses, etc. for that type of spouse, leaving her to still fuck around as she desires. (This said with me not being a lawyer & not positive if things are as I believe!) Enough of that.

---- As stated, I appreciate the attempt, but story didn't move me any. Maybe bec. of the too long history portion. But I'll give this a 3. Bob

Shelly and her friends were sluts, even the fat slob sister. The warning signs were there from the outset and how they handled the wedding!! The post nuptial was the icing on the cake

An older head might have seen the warnings, but he should have known, but often the blood runs to the wrong head in your 20s. Well told an interesting twist a feel of Feb sucks but not enough to be distracting, also a bit more history than I prefer but when I write one ill try and cut it down. Thing is it choked me up a bit so ya thax

i'M STILL TOO SAD THAT ANN DIED.THAT SEEMED TO BE A LOVE THAT COULD NEVER BE REPLACED.

Liked the story overall.

Small nit. The whole context of how he got the pictures was odd. Shelly was sending them? Doubtful. The greasy guy? Ok why> He never even saw Bobby. She needed am accomplice cheating wife or something.

This story had promise. I really liked the first part that included Ann, very nice twist. After that this just goes insanely off the walls. Glad it's fiction. Just wish it wasn't fiction that wants me to completely reject reality vs suspend my belief in it for a bit. Give the author a 3 star for the effort.

What a Heartwarming Story, Great Writing, Great Effort, and Hallmark movie quality! Still got tears in my eyes, I've got to get back to the cheating wives stories! 5 Big blazing stars to the writer! Thanks, Buster2U

This story is a top-twenty contender for the All-Time Dumbest Literotica Story, probably in the high single digits. The reason it places so high is that the writer possesses the technical skills to execute an above-average story. Still, there's apparently an intellectual disconnect where characters and structure are concerned. First, there's a huge, largely irrelevant backstory, 90% of which is not germane to the story. There's nothing to explain Shelly's mental aberration, which caused her cheating, other than the usual over-used, tired character traits which bear little resemblance to reality. Second, her sending texts from an airplane of her cheating is like handing your husband and his counsel the keys to your impending divorce. Like all the women in this writer's stories, Shelly is a poorly designed cut-out, hardly worth mentioning in a one-liner, much less a story on this site. Instead of learning and improving his skills. this writer languishes in the Doldrums of LW-induced, formulaic mediocrity. Then, there's the "legal advice" gleaned straight from the same formulaic, mediocre works cluttering up Literotica's bandwidth. With the photographic evidence, he could've taken the divorce before a jury and eviscerated Shelly. That's because, in American justice, juries are all-powerful and can often right the wrongs of the judicial system. Maybe the dumbest part was Lance Belton hiding out on his airplane. What? First of all, those people never take care of their own airplanes. That's why they have pilots on their payroll. Also, due to both liability and security (remember 9/11?), nobody can stay on their airplane like it was an RV. Instead, they either use an FBO/Service Center courtesy car or a limo to drive them away to the many hotels in the area that serve the fly-in trade. The climax was even more forgettable.

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This story circled the drain like The Turd That Would Not Flush. An idiotic story. If YOU like this story, you're dumber than the fool who wrote it.

I like this story...a LOT! Does that make me extra dumb? One great thing about reading LW comments is all the exceedingly brilliant critics. And if you don't believe me about how brilliant they are then just ask the Anony below this post. He will definitely set you straight.

The plot was a good one but you failed to make it live up to expectations, you dragged it out quick a bit, it just missed being a good story

I liked the story. You people are welcome to your opinions, BUT YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO IMPUNE ME WITH THE PAINT FROM YOUR “STUPID” BRUSH!!

What do you write that is better?

DazzyD

To : all the losers writing negative comments on ths page,

there are plenty of mindless liberals on here writing cuckold stories

just for you, and very few real Loving Wives authors still posting

on LIT. Please feel free to avail yourself of the charms of cuckolding

authors, and leave this very talented author to those of us who truly

appreciate his work!

Don't care what the losers say, this is a great story and worth the five stars. Sure there are things that could be nit-picked and might not hold up in a real court of law, but it's a fictional story that gets the fact that a cheating spouse deserves to go down in flames. Got to say one thing, for those that have never been to Wichita, the rivers that come together there are the Big Arkansas and the Little Arkansas. The Arkansas is pronounced as Ark-Kansas. As my Dad always said, "there isn't any SAW in Arkansas".

I'm thinking that Bobby played the hand he was dealt as best he could for his and the boys sake. Took more of a man to stay the course for the end reward than take the cheap and easy way to go for revenge. BTW, loved the tat idea.

Upgraded to 5 stars second time around. Well written.

Great story really enjoyed it

First off I have to say I liked this story even though it's only February Sucks with a few name changes and a lot more meat added I think that's why I like it

Great writing! Great story! Thank you!! I really enjoyed reading this. 5 Stars

Great story other than. Emily was Ann’s cousin and maid of honour her mother was Pats Sister how would she not recognise or know Bobby or his sons as that side are given the appearance of being a close loving family ???

2 fucking pages of flashback. Christ.

I love these stories and this author knows how to write BTB stories.

Sorry. This was just filled with cliches. There wasn’t an original thought in it. The back story was excessively long and boring. 1*

Thanks for the wonderful afternoon of reading enjoyment. Do more

2nd time through. Thank you.

Started as a great love story that ended in a stupid death. Then we got a variation on how shit is "February" coupled with a bizarrely misinformed view of divorce ... and then a random rapid ending. Sadly unfulfilling after such amazing promise.

Wish I'd not bothered with the last few pages.

Lovely story but a little long in parts. I did enjoy it.

OMG, the story did finally end. I was skeptical for a while. Way too convoluted and looooong ! You have good writing skills, but it seems you need an editor who can limit the enormous amount of detail & filler information that does not add anything to the story. I started skipping entire pages toward the end and was glad when I finally reached the end.. you could be a great writer. Slim down your detail and slip in some sex somewhere. Whew ! I need a nap.

I don't usually care for back story, but it works here.

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I know he'll get screwed on the house and child support, but I don't see how she gets 90% of the assets.

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"I know I made a mistake and will never do that again." - Yeah, until the next time Lance comes to town.

LOL another 10 stars, read and rated the 3rd time in a year. Heart breaking and yet heart warming story set here in the midwest. I loved how the wife sincerely got burned for being a slut! She lost her home, her hubby and her kids! Sure she spent the rest of her life putting a lot of miles on that slutty disease ridden pussy of hers, drinking and dancing is some country western bar. But the truly satisfying parts of life she had but threw away. Perfect for the HallMark Channel. The only significant similarity to Feb Sucks is that there is a football player that fucks the wife. Thanks, for the effort! Buster2U

Skipped over 3 1/2 pages, made it a tiny bit more palatable. That being said, you have zero clue about the civil divorce system.

Yet another unrealistic BTB by someone who is probably bitter because he couldn't keep the wife. Either that or he has secret cuckold fantasies and this how he deals with them.

No different than a closeted gay man acting a homophobic prick.

So which one is it Sunshine? You can tell us, sunshine is the best disinfectant after all.

Guaranteed this idiot is a Trump cultist and is absolutely convinced that Biden stole the election.

Seriously, i will bet real money. No way this dude has any critical thinking left

That really was crap.

Hey Thebard77. Based on your comments below you are a homosexual man that likes it when his gay lover either cums in his mouth or his ass?

So which one is it Thebard? You can tells us. Maybe as a "bard" you can sing us the answers to exactly how gay you are?

And frankly. Based on the in depth analysis and well structured arguments in your comments? I'd recommend that you not admonish anyone for their lack of critical thinking.

I really enjoyed this story. The sad parts were well written and I love the ending. Very Nice!

5 stars from Xluckylee

Wonderful story with a great outcome

I REALLY LIKED THIS STORY...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Great story.

A bit similar to February Sucks in the way she went off with the footballer

awesome

This story had too much back story on the first marriage. I'm not even certain it mattered in terms of the drama, the cheating, the divorce, etc. In fact, that seemed like an afterthought. Not really sure what to think of this one.

A well-written, excellent tale, thoroughly enjoyable! Thanks for a really good read!! Great job!

A well written story, but with many predictable turns and outcomes. Still, worthy of four stars.

JPB

Quality story of a fairly common line no unusual twist but a fun read. ****

Dragged on and on. Could have been written in half the pages.

I liked this a lot. Plot and character development

ard great here. A lucky man with two great loves in his life.

Great story really enjoyed it

Well crap. February Sucks in disguise. It was going fine until that cropped up. 3.

The groom and his bride's maid of honor don't recognize each other? Were they in the same wedding?

Anon

Wedding was about 20 years before reaquantance. People change

Good story, but looked too much like FS.

Your considered way of dealing with the 'feb sucks' element was great. However your mc was a bit harsh on the relationship of her with her kids, it wasnt their fault that she was a slut. Shame, it took it from a 5 to a 4 for me.