by tabber
Over too soon for me. I feel there is more mileage in these characters and this situation. It doesn't say chapter one on this post, but I'm hoping the there will be a chapter two soon.
I noticed the negative comment is unsigned. 'nuf said???
I liked the story. Great fantasy. Does leave things open for a follow up. Looking forward to that, Book marked you so I can check your other stories. Hope they are as good. Oh, Short story is not a problem. You finished your thought. I personally like stories that conclude in one page.
Love that story, would love to find a neighbor to join in. Love doing a dare. Great story
Don't I wish I had a neighbor like that? Great story, where does it go from here?
I loved the story and it was well told. Thanks for sharing with us. I hope these two have more adventures to be shared