All Comments on 'Just Good Neighbours Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wait a minute.

She's locked out of the house. That much is clear from the narrative. So how does she get back into the house to make dinner?

falcon29falcon29about 4 years ago
Pay attention!

Hey, 'Anonymous', reread it. He made dinner for the three of them at his house.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years ago

Sorry, but the start was too long, too boring and too detailed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good fantasy, which is a lot of what this site is about, so - well done!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Can tell this was written by a real runner by the amount of running preamble lmao

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Umm, I guess that this update is the same as the last, and the one before that and the one before that and now the one before that!; I'm afraid it's taken far too long to get around to writing another story, having started it earlier this year. Alas, I have a number of pastime...

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