by PalmerEldritch
That was a good story about a father taking his daughter's virginity and making her a cum slut. I can hardly wait to see you do in the next chapter which I hope you write. I like to twist of mother coming in at the end and father taking control of mother and the same time and telling her to suck the daughters pussy. That was a good twist.
To satisfy those hot little sluts he better get his son to help him. Thanks for the story....Rich
I think you outlined it fairly well. There were some hot moments, but it was a little too rushed shortly after the beginning. Maybe you can do a follow up and have her do a blowjob or gangbang in in alley; with her father as a participant.
yeah a very good story but i think you have enough material there to write a fuller story, like your style, well done
So fucking hot. That was probably the best father-daughter incest scene I've ever read. Thank you so much!
I seldom fail to finish a story if I start it. That is the only reason I continued past the point where he got rough. That is a definite turn off for me and I really wonder who enjoys such handling of the story line. When I consider what this story would have been had Conrad shown love and tenderness to his daughter I think you missed a bet. I hope you will try another along those lines. Would love to read it. I'm giving you a 2 .Good Luck!
She went from a red head to blond n that's where the moment was ruined for me.
Spanking is one thing but slapping her face is quite another. That's not playful or kinky but just violent. You lost me right there.
I think a lot of mothers know their daughter might one day fuck their daddy, because deep down they wanted to do it but never saw it through, so catching them together isn't such a surprise, to join in though is something else.
trashy, poorly written, and the author is probably an abusive asshole. No thanks.
My daughter Alice was in uni studying sports science and wanted to become a personal trainer,her and another girl were the only female's in the class and shortly into the first term the other girl dropped out leaving only Alice in the class with 10 other boys,I knew her lecturer,I played golf with him for years,as it happens I was playing a round with Jon one weekend and I asked him how Alice was doing as she was the only girl in the class,well put it this way the boys are very forward when she asked them for their help! Whats that supposed to mean Jon? Oh cmon she's a pretty girl and she's not shy with it either! You mean to say that she's having sex with the boys in her class Jon? Not just the boys Jon said and winked at me! Let's just say she'll pass with flying colours, you aswell Jon? She's not the only girl that has propositioned herself to me pal! Yeah but cmon mate she's my daughter! She's not your little princess anymore you know! When and where has it happened with you and her Jon? You really want me to tell you mate? I'd like to know yes Jon, ok then in my office mainly but I have fucked her in the classroom before and I wasn't the only one!