by PalmerEldritch
trashy, poorly written, and the author is probably an abusive asshole. No thanks.
I think a lot of mothers know their daughter might one day fuck their daddy, because deep down they wanted to do it but never saw it through, so catching them together isn't such a surprise, to join in though is something else.
Spanking is one thing but slapping her face is quite another. That's not playful or kinky but just violent. You lost me right there.
She went from a red head to blond n that's where the moment was ruined for me.
I seldom fail to finish a story if I start it. That is the only reason I continued past the point where he got rough. That is a definite turn off for me and I really wonder who enjoys such handling of the story line. When I consider what this story would have been had Conrad shown love and tenderness to his daughter I think you missed a bet. I hope you will try another along those lines. Would love to read it. I'm giving you a 2 .Good Luck!
So fucking hot. That was probably the best father-daughter incest scene I've ever read. Thank you so much!
yeah a very good story but i think you have enough material there to write a fuller story, like your style, well done
I think you outlined it fairly well. There were some hot moments, but it was a little too rushed shortly after the beginning. Maybe you can do a follow up and have her do a blowjob or gangbang in in alley; with her father as a participant.
To satisfy those hot little sluts he better get his son to help him. Thanks for the story....Rich
That was a good story about a father taking his daughter's virginity and making her a cum slut. I can hardly wait to see you do in the next chapter which I hope you write. I like to twist of mother coming in at the end and father taking control of mother and the same time and telling her to suck the daughters pussy. That was a good twist.