by westjayne495
I love the way you tell a story, the way you highlight your characters. Can't wait for part 2
Good first chapter
Not a great lover of I/T themes but greatly enjoyed this one and look forward to the next instalment
I liked your story it highlighted the inner conflict that must exist between all family members as they seek to engage in an incestuous relationship. Most writers either downplay or disregard this incompletely.
You had me at the beginning when you acknowledged that there came a time when your father, knowing that you were having sex with others, looked at you and saw a beautiful, young woman. The love dance that followed was just precious and tender, flirting with one another while confronting the forbiddance of incest. The story stops at the perfect place, the end of foreplay. I am looking forward to reading the second chapter that came out a few days ago.
What an absolutely delightful story. Your words painted some very erotic, arousing pictures. Thank you so much for sharing.