All Comments on 'Just My Dad and Me - Perfect! Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Really?? She wears her glasses while they make love?

cslingercslingerover 3 years ago
Dialogue

Good story I am really intrigued on what happens next . I would give it a 5 if there was alittle more open dialogue between the characters . Only my opinion. Please continue with the story with how you want to right it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It happens and this story I think is close to what many times happens. The father is reluctant until he knows that his daughter really wants it.

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 1 year ago

As close to reality as I can imagine it. And, yes, I think she would wear her glasses.

HeatseekingmoisturemissleHeatseekingmoisturemissle10 months ago

Nicely written. One of the best. Keep the glasses. Adds an edge.

goodwabgoodwababout 2 months ago

She wears glasses during sex in stories set decades later.

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