All Comments on 'Just Once... At the Ambassador'

“….. and produce a more thoughtful and considered tale based on the way that I think real people would have acted.”

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Problem with that notion is that the original story didn’t have any people behaving as “real persons” 😎

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That said, this was a very enjoyable sequel…among the best. Points for telling it from Marcy’s POV.

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4 ****

Damn good

Better yet.

This ending to the original was great.

Kalimaxos' comments defending the wife, not so much.

Makes a person wonder if he is a closet cuck in real life.

GREAT

Very enjoyable sequel!

Maybe my favorite sequel to the original. Thanks.

This sequel felt more real than most, if not all, the others. The outcome was satisfying, at least to me.

Super! 5 stars.

Top class! OIMM has really nailed it with this, far and away the best of all the sequels. Five absolute shiners!

You mentioned that you were providing a real world ending. You did. I appreciate not having the comic book

endings where Dr. Trey would have been badly beaten with crushed testicles. That only gets people sent to prison no matter how satisfying it might be. Making a clean and complete break after letting her see what she had wrought was great. Keep writing for real people and not just the cowboys.

Basically a review and brief closing.

What you do to others comes back with interest.

Before you get even get informed with the facts.

first effort was better by far.......

Congratulations to Rick for having found his way into the embrace of another manipulative woman!

Best sequel of them all. IMO.

Well done.

Always have fun reading your stories. Especially the ones I don’t like and make me mad or sad. Best compliment ever

........that's it?

Well in a way she got what she wanted , she just did not expect the results of it , not sure why the swingers couple would be mad they already fuck around , was a good read worked out for the best

Pretty interesting.

Someone wrote this was a better ending of the tale, well not for me. Your first attempt was by far better. The ending was quite wimpy, as far as getting revenge on the asshole and bitch. Both should pay the way you first wrote, or a, wee? bit more.

couldn't happen to a better bitch, (Marcy reminds me of my first wife)

Actually pretty lame of an ending IMHO. I guess this was the more civilized ending as it sure wasn't a BTB. The part about Dr. Trey going into hiding and running off doesn't seem to fit his character of an A type personality.

No BTB of maimed bastard, but still a great story from a different POV.

Clean , concise. NO more needed to be said.

Not my favorite, but adeptly executed and with enough paybacks that it felt satisfying. 4* would have hit 5 either less just summarized st the end. Show, don't tell.