All Comments on 'Just Pretty Glass'

Excellent! So much hurt, so much damage and so much unethical behaviour, but redemption is still possible. Difficult to believe in happy ever after in this case, but hopeful for their future.

Not normally my thing, but this was really well executed.

“You know, for the last few years he's refused to fuck me in the ass. Not even on my birthday. It's always been my favorite thing, ever since I first tried it.” If this isn’t a crime, it should be.

Nicely done combo story - little anal, little romance. Good for you on your first story. Not quite a 5 in my book but definitely 4+. Hope to see more!

Well written! Good story, nice pace, hot sex. I liked it.

Well written! Good story, nice build up, hot sex.

Hello CthulhusButtercup,

This story is one of the best I've read on this site. Character psychology is very well described - does it make me an awful misogynist if I say that I'm not surprised to see that you're a woman ?

Not so much sex in it, but very captivating.

Definetly a 5 !

Hope to read many other stories from you.

F. (from France)

Very nice!

5*

F- I'd say it makes you a pretty good misogynist. 😉

Thank you for your extremely kind and encouraging words.

What I'm working on now has quite a bit more sex, possibly too much. 😅 But I believe it's just as dark and captivating and passionate.

des911 - That's life in a nutshell, no? Some lives are merely darker than others. Thank you for your very kind words!

HC- It's definitely a crime where I come from. 😉

LittleEngine- Thank you!

Thank you all so much for your gracious words!

Hindsight- Thank you!

Impressive first story, C'sbuttercup!

Good character development.

Definitely looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us.

DS

DS- You and me both. 😉 Thank you! ☺️

Really great story! Can't believe it's your first on Lit. This would make an amazing series if you ever decided to write it. Again, great job!

simpletxboy- Thank you! I think these two are done, at least for a while. Too many ideas, too little time to write. 🤷🏻‍♀️

Please, please write more stories. This was easily one of the best reads I’ve had on this website in a long time! Dramatic and extremely erotic- I think because of the buildup.

Anon - That's very kind of you! 🥰 Thank you!

Little sheepish to admit this but I rarely read an entire story and this one I could not stop reading. Well done, keeping my attention. I know a happy ever after is just porn but would like a follow up as I am not ready to not know what happens next with Brian and Claire.

CB — that was a really well told tale! Really too good to be dropped into a niche category like “anal”. Would get more of an audience if it had appeared in Romance, or Erotic Couplings, or (if you are brave enough) Loving Wives 😎. While the last certainly attracts most of the more silly/mean commentary, it also hosts many of Lit’s better writers. Please consider for what hopefully are future offerings!

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5 *****

Anon- I very much hope you see this:

Your comment makes me actually want to keep publishing on Lit. For better or worse- thank you! ☺️

I’m similarly prone to believing happily ever afters don’t actually exist, which is why they usually do in my fiction- I imagine they have well-lived lives full of love and laughter and all sorts of wonderfully sordid happiness together, with only a few bumps along the road. Maybe I’ll revisit them at some point to flush that all out a bit more.

Anon - Thank you for your kind words and suggestions. I'll certainly take them into consideration!

A satisfying story of two frustrated people who finally got together.

That was a very well thought out story that had awesome characters and who were full of emotion that I could feel through the story. I love getting drawn into a tale that makes me feel like I am watching some friends or family members which I get angry or cry just like the character does depending upon the situation. This is one story that I shall be reuniting myself with in the future. Thanks for putting the time and energy into making this such an impressive piece of work.

@Anon- Thank you for your very kind words!