All Comments on 'Just Teasing Ch. 01'

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RegretsRegretsover 6 years ago
Many small faults and a wordy style

How could his girlfriend go on about how he would know that a woman,Kaye, who habitually wore short clothes, had tattoos on her ANKLES? Who has been a naughty boy,looking at ankles. I was a few minutes,reading and pondering the mystery, but it stayed a mystery. But the good that came from this was that I did not feel too bad about not liking the story. There was no teasing. OK, she wore revealing clothes as a habit,but that is not teasing. Teasing is an art, and might happen as a sudden surprise reveal from a woman who does not normally...And then, having been attracted and compelled to stay looking,hoping for more,there is no more. All but crushed one is about to turn away, but then...etc etc. 3*, but I think it should have been 1* as I experience the after taste.

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2over 6 years ago
Not an unusual theme party

After attending a "Blackout" party (no light source, covered windows and doors), another worthy variety, we know for fact that even a heated rush of potentially fucking multiple 'familiar' partners you definitely know them by voice. A facial mask isn't likely to hide identity but... . Face it; almost any sharing party should be a thrilling party. Bring it on. Good read.

yowseryowserabout 6 years ago
Tattoos

The ankles. Always the ankles. Up around one's ears,

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