All Comments on 'Just the Six of Us Bk. 02 Ch. 05'

Please don’t take 6 months to post the next chapter.

So glad to see this story continued. Nice to see Danni and em finally cross the line.

Beth and sarah need to return to the fold. I like matt but the sisters should all end up with mike. Its clear sara still pines for mike and is trying to fight it.

Good chapter ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I'm pleased you are back to continue thisvstory. Thx.

I still love this series. I know I’m being spoiled, but I loved when I could binge through the whole series when I finally discovered it only late last year. I’m desperate to see how Mike deals with his trauma and depression. And I really want to see how his sisters deal with and help him through his issues.

There’s one chapter that keeps popping up in my mind, where Mike is brutally depressed and looking at his reflection in the mirror…and his voice says “Get your shit together, Marine.” Dude that part hit me hard. When you can make a reader FEEL the characters pain, that’s good writing.

I adore how you keep the true LOVE dynamic between him and his sisters. I’m a sucker for genuine love/emotion/romance/drama. Keep up the good work.

I love Mike and his sisters, but it seams that Emma’s and Dannie’s love is changing to being in love with each other and that could change the whole dynamic, with them and the rest of the family, could be the aftermath from Mike leaving them for so long, might have happened anyway, who knows, but it will be interesting to read about it.

Five stars as always.

It took until the last page of chapter 5 before any intimacy between mike and Dani.

Danni mentions that she is not going to run off with Emma - I would call bullshit to this.

The only relationships are mike and Emma with danni as a sex slave or danni and Emma with mike out in the cold. There is no relationship between mike and danni until this last page.

Emma has turned into a cheating slut.

The first 30 chapters were fantastic but is now ruined by book 2

I just finished binge reading the entire series to date and I have to say it has been awesome! Of course I don't always agree with the direction, but I am not the one writing the story. This is your story and you are doing a great job telling it. I love that things don't always work out the way all the characters want. While this is obviously fiction, characters that react emotionally similar to real life just add to the story. This has been, and I hope continues to be, an extremely well written series.

I did notice some rather heated comments. I think that is a good thing. You've gotten people emotionally invested or they wouldn't comment. You definitely pulled at my heartstrings on more than one occasion. There is a lot more Just The Six of Us to write about and I can't wait until you do it.

Bunny ears? Really? :facepalm:

Beth is truly pathetic and totally an unrealistic human being. She's the hottest of them all, right? But she won't settle for anything but her own family and who they happen to be dating? Even if it's after five years? Bullshit! Go get a sex life, lady! Mentalcase, this is bonkers. No even remotely reasonable person is going to keep asking and teasing for sex for five years. No matter who it is. Especially, if they're hot enough to have anyone. It's just....incorrect.

I like book 2 a lot so far, but I think I like book 1 more. Of course I enjoy the sex scenes but it felt like book 1 had more story to it. This chapter had 6 pages, mostly sex and advanced like 2 days. I look forward to the next chapter but I hope that the sex supports the story moving forward and not the story just as an excuse to have the characters fucking.

There are some multi chapter stories out there that I stopped following when it turned into all sex all the time and no story, it can get repetitive. I hope that is not what happens here.

Side note, personally I like Beth, realistic or not in this chapter. I am a fan of brains and big boobs which is how she was described in book 1 so I hope Mike eventually gets to play with all his sisters again.

Thx for the next part but if you are going to keep going with this you slave I'm master stuff and keep it going between the 3 of them I may have to quit reading any future parts to the story I was hoping the trip would get away from it and back to where it should be but I was wrong apparently there isn't anything cool or hot about treating a girl like a slave or having the girl do it and having another girl treat a girl that way is even worse so please let us know if you're going to follow that so I can skip on reading it cause I'm not going to read a story about disrespecting a girl that way any real man wouldn't it's not cool not even for a fantasy

MC keeps on giving! I think it's hilarious how some commenters don't see the big picture. You know you're doing just fine balancing 3 massive stories and real life these days. I love the Beth/Sarah craziness, and lucky Matt gets to witness or even dive in. And Danni finally eats some Emma pussy, yum! You're still one of the best on Lit, so don't let anyone get you down.

I really wish you’d just left the story alone and written something else. Any connection I felt to any of the characters is gone. Not that you’re really focusing on them anymore. Just like the rest of your stories it’s become 5 pages of long drawn out sex and a page and a half of actual story. What a fucking waste.

Book 2 started out good, but then started dragging and then the flow of the story seemed to stall. The idea of bdsm is fine, but your approach to it comes across as somewhat misinformed. I think the combined aspects cause it to become muddled. I love the characters, but the story line has taken a significant hit.

I have just skimmed through most of the comments on this story, I'm not surprised at the depth of feeling at this series, it deals with a lot of the realities of modern life. I don't know blow far in front you are with your prep for its continuation or what lies ahead for the families if the story is to reflect reality then possibly there is more upset and hard times to come but I'm sure that the dynamic of the family will help them through whatever " life "throws at them. Good story well written. Thank you.

Absolutely loved this beautiful story! Thank you so much for sharing it

Ab

you really had it in the first chapters but you are taking it the wrong direction, you are kiilling it with dani. it yous story and do what you like but its not the same.

Loved the series but PLEASE finish it and please get Beth to join Mike et. al. She belongs with him. Thank you ever so much.

A series we continue to enjoy. Thank you so much for this.

so wen u gonna make the story good again since book 1 chap 30 u have compleaty destroyed the story to much sex not enough actulyu story and content hell its been most ur fallowers to sleep and wanting all of them to just die and be dont with it already i hope it gets better soon or i may have to stop reading all ur work and i like the first 29 chaps but so far u have killed a good thing

I'm having a tough time with Sarah and Beth being with Matt. You should bring Missy back to take care of Matt. Although I do like where Emma and Danni are going.

and it just keeps getting worse.

more ruining of Beth. more ruining Danni and Emma with the over the top B.S. BDSM rubbish.

This whole series just keeps getting better and better. Brilliant thanks MC.

The D/s bit gets better, in understanding the dynamics, too.

The situation between Sarah, Matt and (Emma) and Beth seems artificial. Just to keep them, the first 3, in the story.

Yup, devolving into too much BDSM crap...I like "some"...the emotional involvement of Mike and his sisters is "being lost in the translation" here, and needs to be rectified!!

Sarah and Beth are STILL Mike's sisters, he is their brother, and the HAREM needs to continue, with jealousy and drama out aside for the Common Good!!

Next chapter coming up...and, still Five Star story...🥴😵🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟