by Sandwiches_Are_Good_Too
It's the best story i have read! Everything was so crisp and nice. Please please make another chapter or a similar story!
this story calls for revenge by the younger brother.
another part should be writen to see justice done.
8.5/10 i'd read more of it ... the story is fucked up so... good job, i like it.
Nothing "brilliant" about this. Almost positive that had to be the author commenting.
I also hope there is a part 2. And I hope it doesn't get posted because part 1 was more cliche bullshit.
I am not a literary critic but it gave me a hard on and is somewhat what I would like to have done to me.
I think "sandwiches" absolutely SUCK. Lame name, lame author, lame story.
Happy ending? Not really. Mom was bitch. Fucked those kids up and now they are going to save the world. Ok