All Comments on 'Just Them Ch. 01'

A very warm, engaging story, with a delicate touch for the emotional side of incest as well as the physical. I like it lots!

Very well written! you created great scenes and characters flawlessly, and with great flow. keep it up!

Excellent mix of poetry and prose. You created a clearer image for me than any other author I've ever read.

The sex was intense! Got my heart beating faster...

It was so well written and really moved me. I could picture everything that was happening and everything was so well described and beautiful.

Why do I love your stories so much? I'm not sure exactly except you really know how to write. You use words better than most of the people who post here. The characters seem so real that it's not just a dirty story, it's a real story that's also really intense and sexual. I love it!

i really liked how nice and caring these 2 young people were

You have a gift for writing. :)

Penis

beautifully written and awesome