All Comments on 'Just What They Needed Ch. 03'

I love the erotic tension that escalates throughout the story. The dialog is fantastic, too.

Interesting timing of the story that much later, allowed for good build up.

I loved it. The slow character build up reluctance/hesitation on both parts but the utter wantoness of their fucking is incredible. I envy him. I don't see this as a committed relationship but Friends With Benefits maybe? Hoping for another chapter tho. Just to see how far this goes. If any farther.

3 stars

DragonRider55

Hope to read more soon.

The author is really skillful at developing characters and plot, and makes the setup leading to sexual things seem very logical and real rather than staged or like a fake porno yet still keep it hot to read. It's too bad there are not more stories from them as it is really a well done storyline.

Great story made this old man wish for the same to happen to me.