by lemonzinger1
The author is really skillful at developing characters and plot, and makes the setup leading to sexual things seem very logical and real rather than staged or like a fake porno yet still keep it hot to read. It's too bad there are not more stories from them as it is really a well done storyline.
I loved it. The slow character build up reluctance/hesitation on both parts but the utter wantoness of their fucking is incredible. I envy him. I don't see this as a committed relationship but Friends With Benefits maybe? Hoping for another chapter tho. Just to see how far this goes. If any farther.
3 stars
DragonRider55
Interesting timing of the story that much later, allowed for good build up.
I love the erotic tension that escalates throughout the story. The dialog is fantastic, too.