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Anonymousabout 15 years agoSo,so- not believable even as a fantasy
Come on- 70 million and 3 million, etc? I bailed out at the spa in the penthouse. At least your spelling and grammar were okay.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoSpelling
This was pretty weak...and, contrary to the previous comment, the spelling was also weak.
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis has good possibilties
This story has good possibilities but you butchered up the English language so much it should be murder mystery instead.
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