All Comments on 'Justine Ch. 07'

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donaldedonaldeabout 12 years ago
Oboy someone just screwed up

Jeremiah has just crossed the line and he better not hurt those babies. I almost feel sorry for him when Justine gets a hold of him well not really. I just hope he has a long painful death

Poor Justine and Quinn can't seem to get a break here You could of at least let them have some fun before the battle that is to come. Hopefully they can complete what they started there real soon

I wonder what Mikhail game is not sure i trust him but i think he is a cool character. I can not wait to see what part he is going to play in this

A lot going on this time and thee chapter was so good I will not even say that I wish you made it longer even though I always do you are truly a gifted and talented writer and i thank you for sharing that talent with me

BlanckaertBlanckaertabout 12 years ago
Groans in furstration....

Why is it that WE all know you are going to end a chapter in a 'cliff-hanger' we still read them??? I can just imagine you, Kal, still back and laughing at us... You are one damn good writer, please dont stop..... ;)

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
Stirring

You just keep stirring up the pot. I don't think you can help yourself. Which turns out to be a really good thing for those of those that follow you. This is only the second story of yours that I have read but I can already tell you that in that time I have become a fan of yours. I just love Justine and think she defiantly has the makings of a future Queen. Just look at how she not only protected her best friend while human but has continued to try and find her even now. And the way she wanted to protect Quinn right from the start. I can't wait until she discovers her powers that will allow her to take on the devil (Jeremiah Mathers) himself!

ToFall4ToFall4about 12 years ago
Loved it

Gal, another wonderful chapter. I was pressing the refresh button every night and was pleased to see the update. Thanks again gal! Keep on going.

Mostera1Mostera1about 12 years ago
Better an better

I am going to be quick, one word:

TANTALIZING!

Thank you!

M1

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Wow!!! This story is the bomb diggity!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

so jeremiah is going to use quinn's ex wife and daughter to get him and justine to come to him. i still want to know what exactly mikhail is up to and i guess he does have a heart since he saved violet's life when she was a baby and continued to look after her.

lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyabout 12 years ago
nail biting here!

How many more chapters do you envision this story to have? Just curious. Again, well done, kalamazoo707, well done!

QuietmahoganystormQuietmahoganystormabout 12 years ago
Hanging onto the ledge again...

This is one super awesome story you've woven! I adore Quinn & Justine - can't wait to read their explosive fireworks! And Buddy = awesome!

*****

P.S. - any new stories in the works? Maybe something about young Nathan and his mate Louise (from Veronica & Vanessa) or Victoria & Jaime (what's his deal with being a vampire? That's a story in and of itself).

Yay for updates!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 12 years ago
Don't know if your old enough to remember Good Times the Tv Show.....

Damn....damn......DAAAAAAAAAAAAAM!

*bows....thank you....

sblazer227sblazer227about 12 years ago
so good

love this story, my fav character is mikhail, im a sucker for an assassin with a heart.

jazz1190jazz1190about 12 years ago
WOW LOVE IT!!!

love it!!! Now please let them mate soon so he can save his child and ex wife but really i mean his child or get Justine to save them. I cant wait for you to kill Jeremiah Mathers off. Let Justine find Pam..

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertabout 12 years ago
Same Bat time same 'Kala channel"

Ms. Queen of the cliffihanger............so loving this!!!! You're putting the serial of the serials of the past to shame.

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 12 years ago

Smart girl. I wonder if Mikhail will save her and her mother from Jeremiah the sleezeball.

rjo572001rjo572001about 12 years ago
keep it going

usuly like the sex stuff but found this storty to much to stop reading

great story so for

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Quinn is proving to be just what Justine needs. Let them mate before they rescue his ex wife and kids. Let Mikhail be Zoe's mate. She could use someone with his skills in serving and protecting the new king and queen.

You're writing has grown so much.Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for sharing!!

Anjel54

Jujubee58Jujubee58about 12 years ago

Please let Mikhail kill Jeremiah!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Oh my gosh,

I've been waiting for this story to update and ended up forgetting all about it. I'm glad that I finally remembered.

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