by clairelikesit
I enjoyed your first story, even though I found Kafi's eagerness to do everything asked of her a bit stretched.
I'd have liked to have read more about her relationship with Claire beforehand, which might have explained this a bit better.
Keep up the good work!
R.
This guy looks like some sort of animal tamer. Now do this, ok, and now do that, and then this...
Not to say the story is bad, but this seems quite strange.