All Comments on 'Kama Sutra Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Damn, this is one smoking hot story! 5+ Stars!! More please!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please

Really enjoying your story.

5 stars thanks for writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I am giving it 5 stars, because i like the premises so much. There are kama sutra submissions before, but on this incest theme, it is something new. And so many repeated stories now adays (like son injured, mom helped), this is definitely fresh.

From this 3rd submission, i could tell that you have add in both characters' after session talks, as commented by other readers. That is great, as this is character development.

The not so great part, i couldn't imagine these positions as clear as the previous installments. And the character development is a bit fast, not giving me the "act under forced circumstances" unwillingness emotion. This may result in the story unavoidably coming to an end too soon, since both are all out uninhabited.

That being said, however, we could still look forward to, say, when the project finally come to an end, how are they going to go on with their lives!

incestingincestingover 3 years agoAuthor

I urge readers, if keen for illustrations, to go through my 'Profile / Biography' page to find a way to look for reference illustrations.

enjoy :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

First of all, thank you for writing this story!

I am having fun with my partner doing those moves, as described in the text and the pictures.

What standing positions are there from the ancient script?

Pls carry on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Outstanding Erotic

one becomes addictedThanks so much

alandee101alandee101over 1 year ago

So this shoot has turned from a sensual kama-sutra calendar photo shoot to a full blown porn vid, from erotic to smut.

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