All Comments on 'Kanesha Ch. 01: The Auctioneer'

Nice Beginning, can't wait to read the rest. I especially love the setup of the woman auctioneer selling other women. Thanks!

I enjoyed the story, especially knowing from the tag lines of later chapters that she ends up on the block. But there are too many grammatical errors or typos, it was a bit distracting. Things like ‘drug’ instead of ‘dragged’. The writing is good otherwise so please get an editor or at least use a grammar checker.

Kanesha Connors' friend Mr Stone introduced her to a private club where young women are auctioned off for various time periods into voluntary slavery. Mr Stone has proposed Kanesha for auctioneer. While she enjoys performing on stage, her advent in the role has created some friction in the club. A whispered warning from a slave alerts Kanesha that some would like to see Kanesha on the block.

Should Kanesha be concerned or should she continue to enjoy her role?

Beautiful Writing Paul