by monkeyjoe3
The epilogue was so unlike the rest of the story. Guess I was hoping for y'all to have some sexy times together. The passion Karen exudes is deliciously exuberant. LQQK forward to your many escapades. Reading Erotica is a prelude to some very hott times. TYVM for sharing...
This submission was way better than most. I love a guy who is both bad and good. I thought the ending was GREAT!!!
It's nice to encounter a story that has characters with some dimension and reveals something of the relationship they have with each other. Only one thing--I thought it belonged more in Erotic Couplings than in Exhibitionist & Voyeur.
that was a so cheesy ending. you can come up with a better one that that