All Comments on 'Karma'

Very good story, makes good dreams for an old man like me. Thank you.

Your lovely Karma will give me some exciting dreams tonight!

I loved it! What cam ne said about you? Simple! You're very talented!

Love the story and how it was written. I hardly have a comment but I couldn't let this one go by without making a comment. It was written way I feel about life.

Absolutely fantastic love story.

Love it!

My father was 20 years older than my mother. It worked, only down side she was widowed young. Beautiful, lovely, well written story! You're very talented. Thank You for sharing your talent.

Love it. 4 star 🌟🌟🌟🌟

Loved it. I am a sucker for well told stories with happy, feel good endings.

This is without doubt one of the best stories I have ever read!

Thank you from an old man who is still both romantic and horny!

noblegent45

I would be wonderful to hear her, in a couple months, walk up behind him, and say," my darling HUSBAND, I am starting to gain weight. Then show him the positive test he's going to be the father to their twins she's carrying... Then tell him he's the love of her life. I wonder if she'll still drive the Toyota?

Wonderfully amazing. You're an excellent creative writer with a talent for character development while allowing a story to unfold at its own pace.

Wow, what a great love story. No SLUTS, no PIGS, just two people who cared for each other, needed each other, and relished each other.

WOW, thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

Loved it! You find yourself rooting for both characters to get what they both need and deserve. KARMA.

What a lovely story, though the author lets the reader finish the story in their imagination it would of been nice to have another chapter to bring the story to a final conclusion or at least an Epilogue. Well done, 5 stars

Best of yours yet!

Thank you. The other comments already said rhe rest.

Bravo great story, writ more.

My first time reading your work. I will be reading more. This left a very good first impression. Well written and greaat characters. I was hooked quickly. Thank you for your work. Mike

👍👍

Excellent story with realistic characters & a real ending.

Very well done with few homophones & uses of too when only to was called for.

A definite 5 for leaving me happ for having read this.

Bill S.

I'm not a fan of long, drawn-out stories and yours was borderline there for a while, but I'm glad I stayed with it. wonderful dessert!!

You have wonderful story writing and telling skills

sweet, lifetime movie material

Excellent story telling!! Characters are believable and very captivating. Loved how this unfolded and the ending. Nice pace not too fast just perfect. The supporting characters were sufficiently developed to allow the story to progress with much realism. My emotions were tugged and wrung out! Super story excellent writing. Thanks for sharing with us/me. John

"EVERYTHING does happen for the best... when you strive for the best."

Beautiful Story, Very well told

thank you

Very good story and enjoyed it very much and loved the ending.

I've read and reread this, and it always makes me feel good! May-December relationships are challenging at best, but put the right two people together and love becomes ageless.

Gods that was so sweet.

Excellent story.

Being a 2x widower, this tale really resonated with me. Different than your usual fare, but all seem to be well thought out. Please keep up the entertaining writing, you do have talent.

Another excellent story. I really enjoy your writing and the way you build up the story and characters. This one was very heartwarming. Thanks for the good read.

Beautiful.

Lovely to reread. A favourite.

I love a good love story and this was a good one. It needs a little TLC to spruce up the spelling and punctuation but it made me smile.

One of my fave stories

Great story!

Thank you for your wonderful story 5stars gpa

Beautiful 5 stars

This is how I like a romance story. I love the slow build up and when the sex came it added to the story, rather than just being a wank scene. Nothing wrong with those, and I read then too, but in their correct catagory.

Oldie but goodie.

Thanks for a pleasant reading time. This story captures the romance and the sense of Karma 'cumming'' around to reward the good ... and avoids the bad players in life. At least in a story, it can.

A very good story, the build up and then the climax. Very good

I’ve read this story a dozen or so times since you published it here and every time it comes off as fresh and new. Thank you for this.

I loved this story it felt like real people talking and describing their emotions. I hope you wright more like it.

Your work, LC68, is a pleasure to read. Great characters, great dialog, steamy sex.

Loved it. Crying while writing this. The story is excellent.

Please more like this!

Another read of this excellent story.

(2/1/2023) Brilliant! Thank you for another extremely enjoyable read. This is exactly what I search for. Five stars and this story goes on my list. I can only imagine how his daughter would react when she finds out about her future step-mommy.

Great to re-read, in my GOAT folder.

Brill…Wow… Loved it❗️ Do some more please😉

Enjoyed this story the second time around just as much as the first time I read it. Knowing how it would end was okay because I love happy endings. Thanks again.

Love the story and the painful endurance of the romantic pair to fulfilling love. Faith, hope and charity exemplified.

Other stories could use a speed editor, but I am amazed at your prolific and varied plots. Quite a positive storytelling sir. Your life experiences are surprisingly varied and rich. I have learned more from you about relationships out of the 'norm' than from my past expensive shrinks.

The last line has me in tears. God I loved this story so much<3

Truly a great read, one of the best I have seen on literotica. I just hope someday I might be able to write as good as you.

If you could. I have created my first chapter of a story. This is the first time I have ever written anything.

I would love to have your thoughts and critique.

(A Tale of Two Wives 001)

granoldad

A wonderful, beautiful story! Thank you for writing it. Karma is certainly real, as my 81 years have shown me.

Good story. I definitely liked reading it.

Wonderful story, well written. I connected with the characters and rooted for them to make it.

Thanks!

I feel this about Karma: it's a sweet story for a sweet, little girl, Karma, and her Joe, her big ol' Joe that she gives the big eyes to and loves so much. That's what I think about this story and why am I crying?

kisses, `phfina

I love your work and I have read this story before and I came back and read it again and it still is sweet and caring with honest characters with real feelings. Thank you so much for this and all your other works.

Wow. Another fantastic story. Again the depth and detail behind your characters make you work so fun to read! Excellent work. Thank you!

Wow, this was like a movie. Loved it.

This was kind of like the other book. The one with Paula and the homeless boy.

One Word and 5 stars.

Inspiring!

Fantastic story and well written! Thank you for crafting and sharing, it brings great pleasure to read this story, a true gift on many level.

Tugged at my heart; just hate to see people suffer, but knew eventually that it would resolve positively with the sweet girl putting out and love prevailing. As always, your stories are well written and sexy-just wish you had a decent editor and knew word usage a bit better such as when to use “to” and “too.”

Never cried this much at a story 5 stars!

That was just lovely !

That is a BEAUTIFUL love story!! Wish we had more like it.

LeB

whole heartedly endorse ur approach to ur craft, u n those like you dont need neednt shouldnt be apologetic about their process n style

more so we so need the shifting shadows of our fervent desires crystallised embellishing dreams encouraging n restoring failing hope

Karmaà. I am a believer!

Please continue these heart-warning romance stories. There’s a gentleness with “Home is Where the Heart Is” and this one that is very sweet, yet you still are descriptive sexually that is appealing also.

Wow...poor Maria...tried so hard, and Karma came around (in more ways than one!!)

That Karma and Joe belong together is obvious...right from the start. Karma is exactly right...there is nothing wrong with "different"...just gotta be brave and step into it!

Five Stars...🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💫💫💫💫💫💯🎉

Very heartwarming story. Though you have got the meaning of 'karma' wrong (I'm a practising Buddhist living in Florida), I will refrain from nitpicking because the story is so beautiful. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks for this story!

Lovely. BTW, as one writer to another, there are a couple of places where I think you have incomplete edits or something else that just slipped through. Maybe you could use a grammar checker to find them. I didn't think to take notes, I just *had* to keep reading!

Karma is a name that fits and I want to say that it is very refreshing I know this is fictitious but it's a nice story. I personally would love to find a woman like Karma. I want her to be 5'2 110 lb long long chestnut hair to die for please. I want to say this is my fantasy maybe one day it'll come true. I am going to try my hand at writing a story from the inspiration that I've seen and heard in all the stories that I've listened to.

Regards Hopeful

didn't even think much about the age difference .

Dam good!!