by jsmangis
Wonderful story, we lived in Chicago on the north side, Wrigleyville, Fremont St, loved it even though I grew up in a small village. I remembered a lot of the areas you mentioned. I will read the next chapters!
This is a wonderfully written story. Character development has depth and breath. Plot/subplots are logically developed. The English language has been well used without any resort to gutter grammar. Sexual activity reflects real life, both in manner/style and frequency. Based on the first chapter, the major characters respect each other. They are sensitivity to the needs of each other. There is a chemistry between the characters that easily reflects real people and situations. I hope the rest of the series at least matches the quality of this chapter. This chapter reflects the start of erotic literature.
This is a magnificent tale unfolding here. Will surely be on tenterhooks until finish.
So many turns this story can take. Will our woman of mystery lead our budding photographer down the path of espionage; will she use her many contacts to help him to realize the fame and fortune for which he aspires; will she gently release him from her web as she tires of her "boy toy"; will she invite him to the lesbian side of her world; or will she eventually declare her unending love and devotion to her downstairs neighbor. I can't wait to find out.... more please and thank you.
Your story made me smile, then laugh. It was good and I'm looking forward to much more.
A good mix of desire , affection , suspense and quaLity writing.... Well done...
WOW, just WOW. Enchanting, captivating and delightful. I was enthralled, not only by the story line but the characters and the artful development. I am a consummate reader of every genre. I will put all else aside to read first all your Kassandra stories and then search for your other writings.
I REALLY like this story. It has the sex we love to read about but also a very engrossing tale that I can't wait to finish. You did a Hell of a job writing it.
I read CONSTANTLY. Not just erotica, but well known authors in the mystery and suspense genre. This submission kept my attention to the point where I couldn’t wait for the next page. But, my favorite part was that there is actually a story line and not just a bunch of gratuitous sex. Well done !
Thoroughly enjoyed it! Your 'Kassandra' character could be taken so far! The ywo of them could be made into a super 'Spy' series, keep up the good work. Julien from England.
You have a wonderful story unfolding here and it deserves a few more chapters. I will have this chapter bookmarked and come back to check if you do follow-up later. Please do not disappoint many liie me.
Thanks!
OK - your writings rock. To paraphrase dinner at the orphanage..."may I have some more, Sir?"
I really love this series. Please keep up with this series. Can't wait to see where this story goes.
This is great story and hope you continue it. Looking forward to more chapters.
As a photographer, I love the setting and the description of old school darkroom magic. Having the object of lust be a CIA agent might be a little over the top but it sets up so much potential going forward.
If you do not continue this, I must tell you that I do have a very particular set of skills; skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you who do not continue their wonderful stories...
Great story. Always leave the story with readers wanting more. You sure did that.
As an amateur photographer and remembering the old days of negatives and developing I feel connected to this story. I can see it going on to Kassandra being taken care of by him over time.
Kassandra’s story is yet to be told. We must find out how and where she received the marks on her body from her trip. Also, why is she so famous and know so many important people.
The evolution of Todd’s career must also be an important story.
This must be the start of a novel.
Thank you so very much for the quality story.
The story kept me "turning the pages". I suspect Kassie is a contract hit person for the CIA. if not a semi-retired agent or yet a full time agent. Though most full time agents work for the "State Department" lol
Ending messed it up though. K obviously considers him to be a toy boy prostitute she can pass on to anyone. Hope he tells them to sod off.
great story. please share more with us. I, for one, would love to read about toddy's night with Kassie and evie.
I love the photo angle. It brings back many great memories growing up working for a photographer, printing B&W, and having to work the camera. Please submit more.F66d
Loved it. Story and sex, keep it going and maybe some. CIA work for Todd
I really enjoyed your story. Looking forward to the rest of it. One poster thought the photography side of it got to technical but I felt that it made the story feel more full and real. Can't wait for the next chapter - hope its soon.
loved this story, I clicked on it and from the start I couldn't put it down. Please continue this story.
Definitely one of the best "stories" on literotica - believable and very well-developed! I not only loved the detail of the "old-school" printing of the photos, the recovery part of the massage and bath was spot-on, as well.
It will be really interesting to see where you go with this.
Why did Alfredo drop the papers after they walked past him?
Why did you do such a long boring screed on developing film? Almost stopped reading, but decided your writing was good enough to continue with the story. So I jumped paragraphs till I got past it.
This takes me back to the old days of photography when I had a darkroom set up in my family home. Those were the days!
Steve
I felt like i was there with your characters during the entire reading. Please continue to share your talents.
At least tie up some of the loose threads -- like how she's known by so many people, the Bigelow lie, and of course her occasional day job.
Thanks for this one, now bring on Chapter 2!
It was nice to read a story that was believable for a change. Two people that supposedly meet sort of by accident and as the story unfolds there is a bit of intrigue introduced. I can see a long story if the author can stay with it. Please don't disappoint us.
Paul
Waiting to read more!
So detailed and its got a lot of foreplay.
I really enjoyed this story for many reasons. I am a retired photographer and am familiar with the areas you mentioned in this story. I found the plot to be strong and the sex not just wam bam thank you maam. You developed the characters making me actually interested in them. Please continue this story. I would especially like to know what happened to her to get all the bruises that you told about.
5* + Kassandra. daughter of Priam, Princess of Troy, seer of the future. Archive of the past 3000 years. Yep! There are a few stories about her!
Great story -- we need to know more about Kassandra's work -- make her slightly less mysterious
Also we need to learn about Evelyn and Kassandra's night with Todd
If you don’t continue with the story, your readers will certainly contact Kassandra and contract your removal from the planet. Seriously, it’s an awesome story and a great series in the making. Don’t make us wait too long for more stories.
A beautiful lady of mystery, a very lucky photography student and the start of what could be a long and engrossing story. Please keep writing- oh and the sex was well written too!
I loved your story, but found myself left hanging at the end because Kassandra is still a lady of mystery. Specifically I can't help but wonder if she's actually a high-priced escort... that would explain a lot about how she got hurt. If she is how will Todd handle it?
It would be incredibly presumptuous of any of us to tell you where to take your characters. I would suggest that you listen to them and let them lead. They are certainly doing a fine job so far. :)
Loved the way you have built up the story and look forward to the adding of more people and of course starting with the Threesome in the next installment.
lots of room left for my conjecture, I'll follow along, gladly...
This was terrific and a 5* story in my book. Please tell us where Todd and Kassandra go from here. There is so much we don't know Kassandra.
Having done a lot of photography I appreciate your story from that point of view. I don’t have Todd’s experiences with women and doubt Kassandra would even notice me; but, I have known “Kassandras” and am fascinated with the possibilities of her secrets. Are her secrets black ops connected or another of a myriad of possibilities such as her sensual side?
Well written and composed. I haven’t been looking forward to an upcoming chapter so much since Daniel Q Steele’s “When We Were Married”. Thank you for sharing your talent and efforts!
Chuck
This was a nice story, well told and paced. Thank you and please write more.
I am most interested in Kassandra’s life and work. Very sexy 😏
Shamelessly dangling the bait for more chapters? Okay, I'll bit anyway. 5* and I favorited you.
This is as well written as anything I have ever read, and would love to see a continuation of it.
My first ever comment, hooked from start to finish. Please conjure up some more spellbinding chapters. Brilliant!
Great Story, This my first comment ever, Looking for Chapter 2.3.4.5 and more.
Really enjoyed this one, and I feel like there’s a lot more to go with this. I would hope that it doesn’t lead to Todd becoming a gigolo, I’d rather read more about Kassandra and Todd and diving more into K’s story.
Wonderful story. Great balance of intimacy and very realistic story line. Keep up the good work!!
Impressive start to finish, several more chapters would be extremely well received!
BRAVO!!
There are too many mini stories within this story that need to be told. Don't leave us readers hanging like so many other authors have. Please continue it to its conclusion. 5*
You 'know' you have a good story, a vaguely cute protagonist, a tad shallow, you need to fix that, a mysterious woman who gave up her CIA past a little too glibly, a villan or two lurking in the halls of the university... Why spoil it all by becoming a popularity whore? You either have a good story you believe in, or you don't and shouldn't have bothered starting it in the first place. Just get on with it in spite of any feedback you get from us cretins!
Great story! Would love to know about Kassies dark side. There is obviously more to this sexy lady than you are letting on at present.
Great story; one of the best on the site.
Almost as though Konrad and Anne Douglas were melded.
Whats with all the ‘apostrophes’? It ‘distracts’ from the story ‘line’ when you have so many ‘gratuitous’ words marked ‘that’ way. Other than ‘that’ it has the ‘potential’ to be a good ‘series’.
I would really like to know what happens in the next 24 hours after that I don’t mind but as a teaser this story has so many opportunities it’s fantastic.
Individual tales of Kassandra
Tales of Todd on assignment either still at uni or post uni and of course tales of the pair of them getting together as and when.
Can’t wait