All Comments on 'Kat Fucked Up Pt. 05'

..told from her perspective.

Pretty good story, but we need to hear it from her.

Okay...I'm sorry you didn't like the male protagonist's perspective in this scenario, but I don't write from the female protagonist's perspective, as I've never experienced it from that point of view and would be making horrible guesses. Perhaps my friend EveC offers a perspective you might be able to enjoy, which is not to imply Eve is Kat or vice versa, so don't take it that way. EveC's stories are here: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=6313007&page=submissions

My biggest complaint I have with your stories is they seem to have dropped off in details when it comes to the sex. Like there are plenty of implied things in your most recent stories, but I really wish there were more details akin to the beginning of the series. Where there you described the sexual acts here it’s more akin to you going “and then they fucked” and leaving it at that.

That’s fair. Part of it was that this chapter originally contained something I had to take out and part is that I know where it’s headed and wanted to love the story along. In all fairness, I probably should have combined Part 4 and Part 5 into a single chapter.

Yes, it is unfortunate that you had to remove those parts to your story, and I wish I could read the original drafts, but nonetheless I’m still looking forward to the next chapters

lack a little bit detail than the previous chapters for sure. but still, good work overall

Didn't quite enjoy parts 4 and 5 as much as the first three (The stuff with the Client got a little too abstract and confusing with the time skips back and forth), but overall this is a great series. Very well written, and I like how you keep up with her exact number of unique sex partners. Please keep that up. Hope to see this series continue.

I appreciate that. In hindsight, I should have completely revised the parts that didn't conform to Literotica's rules, rather than take them out. I won't let that happen with Part 6.

I can only imagine what else fucked Kat, shame you couldn't include it.

I love sex and have fucked hundreds of guys, but nothing like Kat.

Just loved the pure sex aspect of this story.

Anna

Hopefully this gets continued. It can't end on a cliffhanger like this!

@thebooty1 Why not end on a cliffhanger? I'm working on the final chapter. It's taking a little longer than expected because the I found some direction with the Jordan story.

Ever think about posting the versions that didn't adhere to Literotica rules anywhere else?

I've posted those versions on Reddit before and removed them. There's at least a facade of control over distribution when posted here, but zero anywhere else. Also, I know a couple of the authors here and there are some things I think I, and maybe they, would rather keep private.

I like both of your series. Perhaps you could add some recommended reading to your Favorites list.

I like this series. Great ending.