- Loving Wives
- Kat Mewsings
- Page 2
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Smack... smack... smack, "Oh, oh, Ohhh,aaaouuuiii"
My balls were boiling. I needed to cum and it was not going to take long.
Smack... smack... smack, "I am going to cum... I am going to fill your pussy and Mike is going to come home later all horny and lick your cum filled pussy!" Roger Gasped. "Promise you'll make him... Promise me!!!"
"Oh YES!!!" "I want to make Mike to lick your cum out of me!"
WHAT!!!???? I thought. He made her promise to do what?
"And I will make him fuck my sloppy pussy too!" Kathy screamed.
"MAKE HIM EAT MY CUM!!!" Smack... smack... smack... smack
"Nngggtthhh!!!!" Roger groaned.
"Oh Gawd I am cumming!" Kathy's voice shuddered.
"Fuck me." I said as I shot load after load of my white creamy cum all over myself, the steering wheel, the roof of the car. I looked out the drivers' window and saw my cream slowly sliding down toward the trim. I felt drained that had been so intense. I quickly cleaned myself up and swabbed at the car. Throwing the car in drive, I raced out of the parking lot. I was heading home. I hung up from the spare phone and dialed Kat's phone.
"Hello?" She answered still breathing hard.
"Magic man is heading home baby..."
- COMMENTS
Ruttweilerover 2 years agoIt really is quite a good first effort. You captured something in the psychology of the main character that most people don’t get. His anger and the affront he felt at being left out is NOT a cookie-cutter detail, We’re I in that situation, I would be a bit pissed off and would feel a bit manipulated here, too, I’m glad you added that detail. It certainly made it seem more realistic.
Thanks for writing!
Anonymousover 7 years agoI had a similar experience with my wife's first time date. He couldn't get it up, finally my wife gave up. She sent me to go get them some tea from across the street while they got dressed to get out of there. I was really disappointed as this would have been her first time. When I got back they were lying naked in the bed fully satiated. Turns out it was me. He just couldn't get into it with me staring. When I was out , he told my wife that I made him, feel like a circus performer sitting there waiting for the action to begin. Well since it was supposed to be for my wife I realized I was doing it mostly for my benefit. After that I let her go on her own and retell it to me when she got home. She would record snippets on her cell phone for me or leave her phone on so I could hear. And that!! Is what I see with a lot of this guys they want their wife to perform for them and not for her satisfaction.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoi see the payoff for her, but his? in such situations, would she care if he was with another woman? i think he should find out.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI liked this story. Don't forget the category descriptor is "adventurous women and their mates." I felt this met that pretty well. unfortunately we live in a society where there are way too many people who know better about how we should each live our lives and think. too bad they never learned the two simple rules. 1. "Judge not lest ye be judged." and 2. Never miss an opportunity to shut up. May I suggest you shut off public comments so these jug heads will pass you by.
Anonymousover 15 years agoThe "Amazing" thing I have noticed is the number of people who want to argue the merits of the context of a story versus the technical writing ability of the author. If you don't like the story then by all means be disgusted, score it poorly or just leave. Why does one feel the need to character assassinate those involved. But then again, I am certain some of the people who so quickly criticize have their own dark secrets that make them feel the need to lash out. If you don't enjoy the genre of literary erotica then maybe you should go back to reading your 8th grade western smut stories. Better yet, actually learning new techniques and expanding your horizons might actually lead to you becoming a nicer more satisfied person.
I personally liked this story. I felt it had heart and showed a desire to please his wife. Although the technical merit might have fallen a bit short in this story it seems to be a first attempt at writing. Reading below the surface I felt the author was explaining that the issues that are so bothersome to some was as much a surprise to him. I honestly did not believe he was ever saying he was a closet homosexual or attracted to men, and never did he say that he actually did anything that was asked of him. I think most women wished their men would be more open to these thoughts and ideas. I know I am glad mine is.
